Something about the first page of each chapter looks funny to me.  I expect the chapter header to be the highest element on the page, but the right hand column is higher.  Is that usual?

The page with the Hx grid on it looks a little funny to me too.  Have you tried making the grid as tall as a column is wide?

This is just my impressions  – I don't actually know what I'm talking about.

GOD DAMN IT THIS FORUM EATS MY POSTS ALL THE FUCKING TIME

So:

Simon, these are spreads. The right "column" is the right page.

Vincent, the illustrations on page 37 flirt with the right edge, but then blueball it. What happens when they go past the edge? What happens when they retreat from it?

New plan: no more blueballing, one way or the other.

Simon, your last name's (um) Carryer, right? Am I close?

I haven't quite sorted out those three mini portraits but here's where we're at otherwise:

http://lumpley.com/apocalypse/…..back-3.pdf

Yes! Awesome!

The righthand splash is a nice effect. Easy to find when flipping through, but you start the chapter with a spread.

Hey, I have an annoying idea for you: You know how it's not reall "Rx", but rather, a long R with a cross through it, probably coming from either Jupiter

or Harekhte

What if you made up a symbol for Hx?

Show the whole class!